Group A Buddy Group Post -- December

[dbskyler]

Creating a place for the four of us where we can communicate, support, encourage, poke, whine, and brag!

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[charamei]

Abruptly, the telepathic screaming ceases to affect his mental state and his mind returns to silence, inasmuch as any Time Lord's mind is ever silent, which is to say, he can hear the whole of Gallifrey but nobody's emotional state is affecting his own.

No, I didn't write that. But I am dithering horribly between 'abruptly, the screaming stops' and 'the screaming stops abruptly'. Sometimes it's good to remind myself how much worse it could be...

Also abruptly doesn't look like a word any more

[dbskyler]

LOL, "abruptly" is a very strange word, isn't it? And yes, bad!fic can be oddly comforting. I sometimes go back and look at the first drafts of my finished stories in order to remind myself that good can come from inauspicious beginnings!